SO!! The first prompt that we all agreed on is, "A stranger makes an odd request. " We all went forth and began to write on this prompt, and the first person to finish was Jessica!! Therefore, below we have her story. She read it to me and I loved it. I hope you love it, too. Feel free to comment below with your thoughts. We would love to hear from you. Without further adieu, here is Jessica's story,
Heels
I hate the sound
of high heels on pavement. It doesn’t sound sexy to me; it sounds like a broken
ankle waiting to happen. I wore the heels that night though because Mom always
liked it when I dressed up for family functions. I only went to Katie’s Sweet
16 because she was there for me when Mom died; the other cousins ignored me.
Dad said they just didn’t know what to say. I think that’s a piss poor excuse,
so I showed up for Katie, got her a new silver charm for her charm bracelet,
then I snuck out of the party.
I took off my
shoes and sat on the dock by the waterfront. Mom always said I wasn’t being
social enough for my age. She didn’t really get me. Alone but not lonely is
just how I like it. I heard footsteps behind me. Thinking it was Dad, I turned
around and smiled. Standing there was a woman about Dad’s age in a purple
cardigan and oversized blue jeans.
“My daughter loved
those types of heels,” she said, gesturing towards my shoes.
“Ok. Well, I hate
heels,” I mumbled. “My mom always made me wear them because she said they
looked nicer than flats. You’re smart though, looks like you’re wearing flats.”
She laughed a high
pitched cackling laugh. It was the type of laugh she probably got bullied for
when she was younger, but I liked it because Mom had had a similar laugh.
“I like flats
because they’re more comfortable, but my daughter loved the kind of heels you
have there. I always told her they were bad for her feet but she never
listened. What are they called again?”
“Wedge heels,” I
answered
“Ah, yes, the
wedges. They’re all my daughter wore as soon as the weather got warm enough for
open-toed shoes. Anyway, do you mind if I sit with you for a moment?”
I shrugged, then
nodded. We sat in silence for about a minute until I asked: “How long have you
been without her?”
“Ten months. It
feels like longer though.”
“My mom died
around that time too. It feels shorter for me though. It feels like she was
here yesterday, then I woke up today and she was gone. It hasn’t hit me yet. I
feel like she’s just away on a work trip and any day now she’ll walk right
through the door.”
“I don’t think it
will ever get easier,” she explained. “I think we just learn how to deal with
it.”
“Yeah, you’re not
the first person who I’ve heard say that.”
We sat in silence
for a moment before she whispered: “Honey, I wanted to ask… oh, never mind it’s
probably a bit strange.”
“No, what’s the
matter?” I whispered back.
“Well, the reason
you caught my attention, you see, it wasn’t really about the shoes, my
daughter’s hair was just like yours. Curly hair, same texture and everything.
That’s the real reason why I came over here.”
“Oh, that’s cool.
So what did you want to ask?”
“Never mind. As I
said, it’s strange.”
“I’m sure it’s
not.”
“Well, since your
hair is like how my daughter’s was, do you think, maybe could…could I braid
your hair, please?”
I reached back and
took my hair down from the high ponytail. “Sure.”
She smiled,
looking relieved. She separated my hair into sections and brushed it out with
her fingertips and began humming as she braided. Mom loved that song too.
You are my
sunshine, my only sunshine…
I tilted my
head back and closed my eyes, remembering my family’s last vacation together.
We were camping and dad built a fire so I could roast marshmallows. Mom said
they were way too sweet for her but I liked them. I ate another marshmallow,
then another, then another. I expected Mom to tell me that I shouldn’t have any
more, that I should watch my figure for the upcoming soccer season, but she
didn’t say anything at all. She braided my hair while I ate. Mom began humming
but stopped when I shivered.
“Cold,
sweetheart?”
I
nodded. Dad put more wood on the fire. As it popped and crackled, embers rose
like crazed fireflies racing towards the crescent moon in the night sky. When Mom
was done braiding my hair, I leaned back and rested my head in her lap. She
traced around my face with her fingertips, something she’d done since I was a
toddler. Whenever I had a crippling migraine or a nightmare and couldn’t fall
back asleep, she’d sit with me for as long as I needed her, gently tracing my
face, until the pain subsided or until I drifted back to sleep. Sometimes I’d
try to do it myself, but I felt foolish touching my face in the hopes of
chasing away a migraine or a monster from nightmares I thought I was far too
old to still be having. It just wasn’t the same as when Mom did it.
“There, all done.”
I reached back and
felt the long braid. It was tight and made my hair feel tame for once. It
wasn’t at all how Mom did my braids. She did them loosely on purpose so they’d
come undone because she knew I liked my hair wild, even if she didn’t like it
that way.
“Thanks.” I
smiled.
“Thank you. For
just a moment there I had my daughter back with me.”
“And for a second,
I felt like I was back with my mom.”
We stood in
silence for a moment before she gestured towards my shoes. “You know, maybe
those wedge heels aren’t so bad. Maybe I’ll give them a try.”
“Good luck!”
We both laughed,
and then she hugged me so gently I imagined she thought I would break.
“I live right up
this street in a little blue house with three teacup Pomeranians. You can visit
anytime.”
“Thank you,” I
smiled.
She nodded, turned,
and walked away.
I sat down on the dock, undid the braids and put the heels back on. Mom always liked it when I wore heels.
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awww, very touching story, Jessica <3
ReplyDeleteBeautiful story. I loved this. I loved the favor the woman asked for, very sweet and touching. And I feel it ended perfectly. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteI thought a completely different request was going to be asked! Nice twist!
ReplyDeleteWhat did you think was going to be asked?
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