Tuesday, June 24, 2025

There Was a Statue in the Garden by Jessica VanderWerff

 It's time for our second story responding to the prompt "There was a statue in the garden." !! I'm sorry for such a long wait, but I think you'll have fun seeing how differently Jessica responded to the prompt. I hope you enjoy this story poem, and be sure to leave a comment!!


Trigger Warning: Parent death

There Was a Statue in the Garden


“Is it finished yet?” 


“It’ll be done by this evening,” 

the boy’s father said with a smile. 


It had been only six months 

since the boy’s mother

had left the world, 

and he felt guilty

because part of him

(a very small part)

was angry with her

for leaving him alone.


He had his father

of course

but no one understood him

the way his mother had.

They had joked that they shared one soul

split into two bodies.

When his mother passed away

he felt as though part of his soul

was somewhere else

waiting to be reunited with him. 


Now the boy had to wait for many things:


Waiting for his grief to lessen

Waiting for many years to be reunited with his mother

Waiting for the marble statue his father ordered 

fashioned in his mother’s likeness to be completed


But tonight 

the statue 

was finished.


And when the velvet curtain was pulled 

off of the statue

in the light of the sunset that evening

the boy felt a little less alone in the world. 


The first thing the boy noticed 

was not the face

of the carved marble, 

but the arms. 

The long slender arms of the statue 

were outstretched 

as though they were reaching for an embrace.

The boy liked to believe 

that this was a message 

just for him,

reminding him 

of his mother’s love for him. 


He spent day after day in the shadow

of the statue. 

Countless hours 

Staring at his mother’s likeness,

dreaming of the day he would return to her. 


“Hello!” 

The boy turned around 

and saw his father’s wide eyes 

and frown that made his wrinkles appear

more severe than they actually were. 


“I’ve called you several times,

didn’t you hear me?”


“No, I didn’t.” 


His father sighed

and stared at the ground. 

“I’ve got something to tell you

and I know you won’t feel ready for it,

but sometimes that’s when the best things in life

happen to us. 

I’m sorry I didn’t involve you, 

But I’ve gotten married.” 


The boy sank to the ground 

and crossed his arms 

over his chest

as though he were dead. 

He cradled himself

rocking back and forth

as disgust and shock set in. 


Something crumpled inside of him. 


His father spoke 

before walking away.

The boy did not hear him. 


He didn’t remember

the day he met his stepmother

or her son.

He only remembered the day

he looked out his bedroom window

and saw his stepbrother

swinging on the arms 

of his mother’s statue. 

He was only a toddler

he didn’t know any better.


But the boy didn’t care. 

He went into a rage,

allowing the anger to overtake him.

His world turned blood red. 


The boy ran into the garden,

pulled his stepbrother off the statue

and threw him to the ground.

He stared in shock for a moment

as he realized 

that one of the arms 

had broken 

from the statue. 


“Jacob!” 

The boy heard his father yelling his name,

but he heard nothing else.

His ears filled with a ringing,

he went to his bedroom

and made his own prison,

locking himself away 

from the outside world. 


After three days

he emerged from his room.

He found his father

reading alone in the library.

They looked at each other

but said nothing.

He found his stepmother

in the living room.

They looked at each other

but said nothing. 

He found his stepbrother in the garden.

Jacob sat down beside him. 

“Michael,” Jacob whispered.

The little boy turned away from him. 


Jacob looked at Michael’s arm

and winced at the hand shaped bruise

Jacob had left 

when he pulled Michael

off of his mother’s statue. 


Jacob stood 

and offered Michael his hand.

Michael hesitated

and then took his stepbrothers hand.

They walked together 

to the statue. 

Jacob picked up 

the marble arm 

that had broken  

from his mother’s statue. 


“Fix it?” Michael asked.

“No,” Jacob whispered.

Jacob put his hands into the earth

and began to dig.

Michael followed his example.


When they had dug a large enough hole

Jacob placed the marble arm 

into its little grave

and together

Jacob and Michael 

filled it with earth. 


Hand in hand

they walked away,

and Jacob decided

that he loved his mother 

the most in the world,

but he didn’t need 

the statue 

anymore.  


Friday, January 31, 2025

Statues by Amanda Leigh

We've been gone for six months. We never claimed we would be on a schedule with this. lol But, we had picked our new prompt and I have the first story in response to it!! I am very excited about it. I like the way it turned out, and I think it feels like "Are You Afraid of the Dark?", which would be the second story I wrote that feels that way. Can you tell it influence me as a child? haha. I loved it so much. Anyway, I am going to share the prompt and then my story, We would love to hear your comments; it really helps us and gives us a boost, especially if you really enjoyed the story. And if you can share this, that would be amazing, as well. That can also really help spread the word. Thank you again, and happy belated new year!! 

Trigger Warnings: Swearing, Ouija boards and creepiness? 


 

Statues by Amanda Leigh

We’d heard the stories of the statues. Everyone had, growing up. Not everyone believed them, but those that did were adamant about the truth of them. My friends were never so convinced. I had one experience that planted a seed of doubt in me; one that grew steadily during this event. We thought the stories sounded a bit like those moving statues in Doctor Who. Of course, nothing remotely similar could exist in the real world, right? Looking back, I’m almost embarrassed to admit the arrogance of what we did. I wondered now if things could have been different if we took the legends more seriously. If we had only known the truth… 

***

It was a normal spring day, like any other in our little town. And as most teenagers growing up in a small town, we were bored out of our minds. Never a good thing. In times like this we could always be assured one of us would come up with some hairbrained idea, and the others would of course follow along. What else would we do? Say no? Of course not. First off, we were bored and wanted something to do. Second off, none of us wanted to come as a chicken. So we took every idea, every dare ever set to us. At least, until the events of this ordeal played out. Then everything changed.

Colin flicked the little paper football he made across the table at Kelly, and missed. “Shit,” he swore loudly.

“Language,” Ernie joked with a smirk.

Colin said something far more foul.

“You’re just mad ‘cause you’re losing,” Ernie said.

Colin groaned. “No, I’m mad ‘cause I’m bored. This place is so boring!” He yelled out the last word. Kelly and I rolled our eyes. He was always saying that. We all felt that way, but Colin was undoubtedly the most vocal, and loud, about it. It honestly got on all our nerves. But he was one of us. He was also the one who came up with the most, and often most out there, games and dares and adventures for us. And today was no different.

“I’ve got an idea.”

“Well, this can’t be good,” Kelly groaned.

“Hey, shut up,” Colin said, a frown in place. “It’s a good one, trust me.”

“Trust you, sure,” I said. “Remember what happened last time we did that?” I looked to Kelly, and then to Ernie, and they both snickered.

“Hard to forget,” Ernie muttered.

“Yeah,” Kelly agreed. “Ending up in your neighbor’s backyard covered in garbage is not something that will leave my mind for a while.”

Colin groaned, almost growled, this time. “Come on, just listen to me, would you?”

I held my hands up, and after sharing a glance, Kelly and Ernie mirrored the motion. “Alright.” I held out my hand in an invitation. “Continue.”

His smile looked devious, and I was more doubtful than before, which said a lot. “Okay.” He leaned forward conspiratorially, like he was about to whisper a dark secret to us all. Turns out, that was not far off. “You all know the stories of the statues, right?” His grin widened, and I felt a shiver start to take hold. That seed of doubt taking hold. This was not good.

“Of course we do,” Kelly said.

“Yeah, everyone does,” Ernie agreed with a shrug.

They all looked at me. “Yeah, I know about them,” I said, trying to keep my voice light, casual, detached even. “What about it?”

“Let’s find out if the stories are true.”

My heart dropped just a little. His smile looked almost manic now.

“How exactly do you propose we do that?” Kelly scoffed.

“We go to the source.” We were silent, and Colin kept going. “Most of the stories say the one around here is seen next to the graveyard, in that old man’s garden.”

“Oh, great, a graveyard,” Ernie groaned.

“Yes, a graveyard. It’s not my fault that’s where it is.”

“And what exactly are we going to do when we get there?” I asked.

“We’ve got an old Ouija board in the top of our closet at home. We’ll go get that, take it to the graveyard near that old guy’s garden, and then we’ll use it.”

We were all silent, and silent just a little too long, especially for Colin’s taste. He scoffed. “Oh come on, are you scared?”

“No.”

“Of course not.”

I shook my head as Kelly and Ernie answered simultaneously. Then Kelly spoke up again. “So, what? You think the stories of statues moving are because of ghosts? You think they’re being possessed by spirits?”

“I don’t know, why not? Couldn’t hurt to find out, right?” He winked.

I thought that it very possibly could hurt to find out, but I wasn’t about to say anything. I knew there would be no stopping him, not when he had his mind set on something. (October 21, 2024)

“You don’t really believe that, do you?” Kelly asked.

Colin shook his head. “Nah, but it’s something to do. It’ll be fun. Hey, maybe we will see something! Wouldn’t that be cool?”

I couldn’t quite make up my mind on that one. Once, when I was little, I was walking by that old man’s house and there was a statue in the garden. When I walked back that way with my mom, I was so certain it had moved. I knew it was not in the same place, but when I told my mom, she wouldn’t believe me. She said I was just imagining things. I think she did it to comfort me, but it still irritated me. Over the years, though, I grew more sure that she was right; I hadn’t seen anything strange. But doing this? There was a still a niggling feeling of uncertainty I couldn’t shake.

***

Before I knew how I even got there, we were up in Tina’s room, Colin’s sister. He stood on tiptoes and reached up into the shelf above the rows of clothes in her closet to grab the Ouija board, which nearly fell on his head when his siter burst in and scared the shit out of us. He caught it just in time, held it to his chest, and fled her room laughing right as she slammed the door. She didn’t ask for the board back. Part of me almost wished she did.

Then, once again, we were following him. Out the front door, to his car. In the backseat I went, next to Ernie, and we were on our way. Suddenly, we pulled up to the cemetery next to the old man’s house. There was that damn statue. Car doors slammed around me as everyone got out, and I shook myself out of my thoughts and joined them. Colin was in the front, of course, Ouija board in hand, ready to go. Ass.

Through the gates we went. Colin stopped underneath them and whistled. “Spooooky,” he said, drawing out the word and laughing as he headed farther into the grounds of the cemetery. Kelly caught my eye, and we rolled our eyes as we followed.

“Here,” Colin said, stopping by a headstone a little ways into the graveyard. “We’ll set up here. We can see into that old man’s garden. It’s perfect.”

“Sure,” I mumbled. ‘Whatever.”

“Scared?”

I didn’t bother answering him. He was my friend, but he was a jerk. I was pretty sure he was my friend, anyway.

Kelly laid out an old beach towel she grabbed on the way out of Colin’s house. “What?” she asked as Colin raised an eyebrow. “Excuse me for not wanting to get dirt on my ass.”

“Such a girl,” he grumbled

“Oh, you noticed?” she snapped before sitting cross legged on the towel. We all joined her, even Colin, despite his attitude.

He set up the Ouija board.

“Alright,” he muttered. “And this…thing.”

“The pointer?” Ernie suggested.

“I think it’s called a Planchette” I said.

“How the fuck do you know that?” colin asked.

Ernie and Kelly stared at me, too. “What? It’s not that weird, guys, lay off.”

“Alright,” Colin said. “The planchette. Know it all.”

Again, I ignored him. It was often the best way with Colin.

Colin took out the Ouija board, and set it up between the four of us. A slip of paper fell out by Ernie’s feet.

“What’s that?” I asked.

Ernie picked it up. “Instructions.”

“Ouija boards come with instructions?”

“What do they say?” Kelly asked, curiosity tinging her voice.

“Who cares?” Colin said. He snatched the paper from Ernie’s hand and stuffed it in the back pocket of his jeans. “It’s a Ouija board, what is there to instruct us on? Put your hand on the planchette, and let ‘er rip.” He set the planchette on the board and looked between us again. “Come on.”

We all leaned forward over the board, and placed our hands on the planchette. For a moment, no one moved or spoke.

“I feel like an idiot,” Ernie spoke up finally. “What are we supposed to do?”

“We ask it questions, duh,” Colin said.

“I still feel dumb,” Ernie grumbled.

“Ask it something,” Kelly said.

“Alright.” Colin paused for only a second. “Is anyone here with us right now?”

We waited. Nothing happened.

Then, the planchette started to move. I wasn’t moving it, I just held on and moved with it. It fell onto the word Yes.

“Yes?” Colin repeated. “Who is here with us?”

The planchette was moving again. Ernie and Kelly looked skeptical but now with a hint of fear. Was this one of us, or wasn’t it? We watched as the board spelled out a word.

T-h-e-b-o-o-g-e-y-m-a-n.

The Boogeyman.

Ernie grabbed the planchette and hurled it at Colin’s head as he burst out laughing. “You asshole!” he yelled.

“Oh, come on, man, that was funny!” Colin said. “You really believed that.”

“I did not,” Ernie said as Colin placed the planchette back on the board. I heard a rustling sound behind me, and froze for just a moment before looking over my shoulder. For just a split second, I caught a shadow out of the corner of my eye. But that could have been anything.

“Shit!”

I whipped back around to Ernie, Kelly, and even Colin with their hands up in the air, feet pulled toward them and away from the Ouija board.

“What?” I asked.

“That…that thing moved, man,” Ernie said.

Colin shook his head again, but it was different this time. He shook it like he was trying to shake sense back into himself. “No, no,” he said. “That…that can’t be right.”

“You saw it!” Kelly yelled.

“I don’t…I…” he rounded on me. “What did you see, Cash?”

“I didn’t see anything,” I said. “I was looking behind me. I…I thought I heard something.”

“You what?” Kelly demanded.

“I thought I heard something. Over by the house.” Even Colin looked terrified now, his eyes wide, and his jaw shut tight.

“And?” he asked. “What happened when you turned to look? Did you see anything?”

“I mean, I…I thought I saw something.”

Silence.

“But I barely saw it. It was just a shadow. Out of the corner of my eye. It was probably nothing.”

“Yeah. Yeah,” Colin said. “Cash is right, we’re just freaking ourselves out over nothing. Come on, guys, let’s not wimp out. There’s nothing going on here.”

He leaned back over the board and looked at us all expectantly. “Come on,” he repeated.

Ernie leaned in first, then Kelly, I hesitated just a second longer and then I leaned in, too. We started again with the questions, but this time, not a thing happened. We tried for five minutes before Colin gave up and sat back. He didn’t try to prank us again, though, which was unusual for him. He must have still been scared.

Ernie, Kelly, and I leaned away, too. I leaned against the heels of my hands on the blanket. I kept thinking I heard something near that old house, but nothing was ever there. I couldn’t help but to check the statue, too, and it was still in the same place. At least…I think it was. Part of me was sure it had moved just a tiny bit, just a few inches, but how could I really be sure about that? I was imagining things; I had to be. The atmosphere was playing tricks with my mind. And no one else seemed to hear anything.

“See?” he said. “There’s nothing going on here.”

That time, we all saw it.

The planchette flew across the board straight to the word Yes.

Colin cursed and jumped up. Kelly shrieked. Ernie nearly fell over. And I was frozen in terror.

“Did you see that? You all saw that, right?” Colin asked frantically, then looked around the graveyard. His breaths were coming out ragged, and at that moment, I hear another noise behind us.

My jaw clenched, too afraid to look behind me.

“Okay,” Ernie said. “What the hell is going on here, man? This can’t be real. That can’t be real, right?”

“You just saw it,” Kelly said. “We didn’t do that. None of us were touching it.”

“No, no, no,” Ernie said.

“Then who did it?” Kelly demanded. Colin sat back down slowly.

He shook his head. “I don’t know.” When Colin wasn’t being his usual snarky, cocky self you knew it was bad.

“Do we…do we keep doing it?” Ernie asked.

I froze. A shiver crawled up my neck, like cold fingers marking a trail one by one.

Something was rustling the leaves behind me, in that old man’s garden. But this time, the others heard it, too.

“What was that?” Kelly said. We were standing in a sort of circle formation. My back was to the house, Kelly and Ernie on either side of me, and Colin was in front of me. He was the only one facing the house head on.

“Did you see something?” Ernie asked, urgency edging his voice now.

“I don’t…I don’t know.” He blew out a breath. “That statue…was it always there?”

“Don’t. Don’t fuck with us, man. This is not the time,” Ernie said.

“I’m not fucking with you, man. I swear.” Colin looked between all of us. “You all heard it, too. I know you did.”

“You’re the only one facing that garden! You could totally be screwing with us; one of your jokes!”

“I’m not!” Colin yelled, and at that moment the planchette moved again.

We all cursed and jumped farther away. “Do you think I’m fucking with you now?” Colin demanded of Ernie, who fell silent and shook his head. Kelly looked at me and I shook my head just a little, saying I don’t know.

“What now?” Kelly asked, almost in a whisper.

We all hesitated, and then Colin said, in a sober voice, “Let’s sit back down.”

“Sit back down?” Kelly said, her voice breaking on the last word. “Are you crazy?”

“No, I think we should finish this. What do you think, Cash?”

I blinked, surprised he was asking me.

“Well?” he said. “Should we go or should we finish this? Let’s see what the hell is going on. I need to know.”

“I don’t need to know,” Ernie said as Kelly shook her head.

“Then you can leave,” Colin said as he sat down. “Cash?”

Ernie and Kelly stared at me, a second passed, and then I sat down cross legged across from Colin.

“Cash?” Kelly whispered.

“I want to know more,” I said.

Kelly narrowed her eyes at me, and then sat down. After a moment, Ernie sighed and sat with us, too.

“Okay,” Colin said. “Let’s keep going. Put your hands back on the planchette.”

The planchette was now on the letter S. I put my hands on it, and Colin looked to Kelly and then Ernie, raising an eyebrow. Kelly put her hands with ours first, and then Ernie followed.

For a moment, nothing happened. Just as I glanced up, I felt the planchette move under my fingers and my eyes shot back down to look at it.

S-t-a-t-u-e

Statue.

We all froze.

“How do we know one of us isn’t doing it?” Ernie asked.

“Haven’t we been through this?” Colin said.

“It doesn’t mean you might not be doing it now!”

“Ernie-” Colin yelled, but never finished, because the planchette was moving again, faster this time.

S-t-a-t-u-e

S-t-a-t-u-e

Spelling it out over and over again.

Then it moved faster, and faster across the board, the same letters repeated. Ernie yanked his hands away.

“What are you doing?” Kelly said.

His eyes were darting back and forth, frantic but trying to hide it. “Showing you it’s not me doing this shit.”

“Well, it’s not me, either,” Colin said.

“Or me,” Kelly said.

“Or me,” I added quietly.

“Take your hands off,” Ernie said.

“What?”

“Take your hands off it,” he repeated. “Then we’ll definitely know it’s not one of us.”

Something flared within me, like little alarms ringing. Something inside me felt like this wasn’t a good idea, but I wasn’t entirely sure why.

That’s when I heard another rustling sound behind me, near the old house. I wanted to look, but honestly, I was terrified to. The planchette stopped moving. I glanced to my side and when I looked back, everyone else had taken their hands off.

“Come on, man,” Colin said. “You, too.”

You shouldn’t, a voice in my head said, but my friends were staring at me, and so, I lifted my hands from the planchette.

And it started moving again all on its own.

S-t-a-t-u-e 

Again. 

S-t-a-t-u-e 

"What the hell is this?" Ernie said.

"Did you hear that?" Kelly said, her head whipping around to look behind her, in the wrong direction. I knew the sound was coming from behind me. She looked from side to side. I gulped, torn between not wanting to turn around and see, and being too terrified and too curious not to turn around.

"Yeah, I heard it," Colin said. Now looking from side to side as well. When he couldn't seem to find the source of the noise, he looked back down at the board with the planchette still going.

“Who are you?" he asked it." What do you want?"

The planchette stopped abruptly, halfway between the letter T and the letter A. And for a moment it did not move. Then slowly, very slowly, it started to move once again.

“S-o-u-l,” we all read it in unison as we watched it happen.

“Soul,” I said. Was that thing about the statues being souls trapped actually true?

“It’s moving again,” Kelly said. We all looked down and started spelling out the word.

“S-o-u-l. Soul.”

Again, it moved.

“T-r-a-p-p-e-d-s-o-u-l.”

“Trapped soul,” Ernie said.

We all looked up at Colin.

“No, no way,” he said.

“Trapped souls,” Kelly said. “The statues…All the legends. Is that really why? They’re souls trapped in these statues?”

“That’s fucking nuts,” Colin said, a frantic edge to his voice.

“Yeah?” I said. “You thought the same thing about that planchette actually moving a few minutes ago. Now look at it.”

Colin’s breath fogged out around him as he exhaled, and my brows furrowed together. It hadn’t been that cold when we got here. When did that happen?

Crack.

My widened eyes were mirrored in everyone else’s faces as we heard the sound; it sounded like the snap of a twig.

“What was that?” Kelly whispered.

“Sounded like a twig snapping,” Ernie said. He was whispering, too.

Colin was looking down at the Ouija board with a determined look on his face. “Where are you?” he asked again, his voice firm.

We waited, now all of our breath fogging as we breathed out. I shivered, and Kelly drew her coat tighter around her.

“There it goes,” Ernie said.

It was going fast. We didn’t start reading it until it was in the middle.

R-d-e-n-g-a-r-d-e-n-g-a-r-d-e-n

We finally caught up to it as its pace slowed down.

“G-a-r-d-e-n.”

“Garden?” Kelly asked, and a chill skittered down my spine. That was where I thought I’d been hearing the noises this whole time. My body felt frozen, too scared to turn around or move at all. I thought about that phrase Fight or flight. I thought it was wrong. It should have been Fight, flight, or freeze because I was freezing up.

“Shit!” Colin yelled, and I looked down just as the planchette flew across the grass, landing by a headstone some six feet away.

“What the-”

“Did you see that?”

“See what?”

I couldn’t keep track of who was saying what. It was devolving into chaos. Finally, I turned around when I heard another sound, another snap, another crunch of leaves. I couldn’t stand there with my back to the garden anymore. I could swear that my blood turned to ice in my veins. The statue that I know I saw when we walked in had moved. It was at the side of the house, and its arms were in a different position. It was staring at me, at us. I knew it couldn’t be, but it was.

“Oh my God!”

They’d seen it, too.

“It moved! It moved!”

“Shit! That planchette thing moved again, too.”

“The statue…it moved…it wasn’t there.”

“Colin! What are you doing?”

“The planchette.”

“Leave it, man!”

“But-shit!”

The statue moved again; its hand moved.

Colin abandoned the planchette.

“Come on!” Kelly yelled, grabbing my hand and pulling me along. Colin scooped up the board, and we shot out of there as fast as we could.

It was only days after that we found out we were supposed to close the session with Goodbye.

And a few days after that that we all swore we saw one of those statues in our backyards.

© Copyright 2025 Amanda Leigh www.authoramandaleigh.com

There Was a Statue in the Garden by Jessica VanderWerff

 It's time for our second story responding to the prompt "There was a statue in the garden." !! I'm sorry for such a long ...